Friday, January 23, 2015

Garnethill (Denise Mina) Chapters 21-27

The plot seems to be getting confusingly complicated in this section.  Or maybe it’s just me.  In a mystery like this one, we know that clues are being revealed in a certain order – or at least it feels that way – so that the reader is being given enough information that he or she just might “solve” the puzzle of the mystery as or even before the characters do.  Some mystery writers may make a game of this, like a logic puzzle; others not so much.  It’s not clear to me how much deduction we’re expected to attempt in this story, but clues are being dropped in our laps at a pretty good clip at this point.

Often, a mystery will end with the protagonist speaking to a gathering of people – in a courtroom, for example – in which he or she reveals all, and shows how the evidence was right under our noses if we had just been clever enough to figure it out.  (If one could sit and read the book straight through, instead of over a period of several days with long interruptions, that might be possible with this story.)  But something tells me we’re not going to see that kind of wrap-up here.  It would seem out of character for a book like this.  Rather, things will come into focus suddenly with the occurrence of one event, or the killer, thinking he’s getting away with the crime, will gloatingly tell Maureen what she had missed all along.

Martin’s list of names apparently contains a major piece of the puzzle, but it’s hard to see how at this point.  ‘ “Those are the ones I remember,” he said.  “There’ll be some I’ve forgotten, but those are the full-timers who were moved after the scandal.”  She folded it up and slipped it into the condom pocket of her jeans.’  Wait – condom pocket?  Is that a reference to the little sewn in pocket that some denim pants brands have just above the front pocket?  All this time . . .  Actually it has several traditional uses:  watches on chains, tickets, change, gold nuggets for miners.  But according to one source, at the Levis factory itself they have indeed been called condom pockets by some.  I’m now ready for “Jeopardy!”
When the police allow Maureen to move back into her apartment, they inform her that she will have to clean up all her boyfriend’s blood on her own.  This, knowing her psychiatric history and the fact that she has been suicidal at times in the past.  Pretty cold-blooded.  Her brother offers to help her clean it up, but, remembering that the police had made wreck of his place in their search for evidence, she says, ‘ “You’ve got your own house to worry about.  I think I’d rather do it alone anyway.”  It might have been the void left by her lapsed Catholicism but important events prompted her need for ritual.  Certain things had to be done in certain ways to mark the end of the cycle of events; like secular voodoo, it helped to resolve matters, signifying and punctuating.’
Officers McEwan and McAskill agree to accompany Maureen to the Equal Café, her local greasy spoon after helping her lug the bloody living room carpet down the stairs.  ‘ “I found a stain in the cupboard,” said Maureen, shaking her sore hands.  “Yeah?” puffed McAskill.  “Yeah.”  He brushed off the front of his coat and rubbed his hands together.  “What was it, Hugh?”  “What was what?”  “What was in the cupboard?”  “I can’t tell you that, Maureen.”  “Why?”  “We’ll need it to identify the killer.  If it leaks, it’s useless.” ‘ And at the Equal Café they order something called the “all-day breakfast,”  consisting of:  ‘a runny fried egg, a potato scone, black pudding, Lorne sausage, mushrooms, fried tomato and bacon.’  One wonders just what someone might be doing “all-day” after a breakfast like that one . . .
 


Next Week:  Conclusion - Chapters 28-38



 
 

February's book of the month:

“The 158-Pound Marriage,” by John Irving!

Amazon.com Review

The darker vision and sexual ambiguities of this erotic, ironic tale about a ménage a quatre in a New England university town foreshadow those of The World According to Garp; but this very trim and precise novel is a marked departure from the author's generally robust, boisterous style. Though Mr. Irving's cool eye spares none of his foursome, he writes with genuine compassion for the sexual tests and illusions they perpetrate on each other; but the sexual intrigue between them demonstrates how even the kind can be ungenerous, and even the well-intentioned, destructive.


Week 1:  Chapters 1-3
(First post, 2-6-15)

Week 2:  Chapters 4-5
Week 3:  Chapters 6-7
Week 4:  Chapters 8-10

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