The arrival of Lily’s detective boyfriend, Jack, in Bartley
is less of a surprise to us than it is to her.
Is it too much of a coincidence that a case he’s working on brings him
to this small town at exactly the same time she is there for the wedding? We’re not as amazed when these things happen
in real life as we are skeptical when they happen in fiction. And is it just a further coincidence that
murders are suddenly taking place; murders that are unrelated to Jack’s
investigation, as far as he or anyone else can tell? And if that isn’t coincidental enough, Lily
happens to be the one to stop the homeless purse snatcher, who seems to be in
possession of what might be the weapon used in the murders.
“I shook my head as I stared out the living room
window. I was not a law enforcement
officer or any kind of detective, but several things about the
homeless-man-as-murderer scenario just didn’t make sense.” She may not be a detective, but she analyzes
the data she does have with razor-sharp logic.
“If this man was clever enough to hide Diane Dykeman’s purse, which he
almost certainly had stolen, why hadn’t he been clever enough to get rid of the
evidence of a much more serious crime?”
The fact that the doctor was still sitting at his desk when murdered
tells her that the murderer was someone he knew and trusted – otherwise, he
would have gotten out of his chair to deal with the stranger, who couldn’t have
snuck up on him. Lily may not be a
detective (or a murder mystery writer!) but she sure thinks like one.
In Jack’s hotel room that night, along with some very steamy
bedroom action (Harris leaves just enough to the imagination, thank you very
much) Lily gets the full explanation of the case he’s working on. Is this realistic? Does a private investigator share everything
he knows about a case with his girlfriend?
If he does, should we suspect his professionalism? Yes, the case revolves around Lily’s sister,
so the outcome of the investigation is very much in her interest. But doesn’t that make it even less excusable
to divulge sensitive information to her about the case? He understandably trusts Lily with the
information, but if it should come to light later that she knew all the
details, that could reflect very badly on his professionalism to most
observers.
Next week: Chapters 5-6
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