Friday, December 14, 2012

A Holly, Jolly Murder (Chapters 5-8)

FM:  This book continues to be entertaining, but I can’t help feeling that it falls into a trap that I’ve seen before, especially with Mystery stories.  The first quarter of the story contains all the fun of introducing the characters, establishing the momentum of the story, discovering the corpse/theft/puzzle that needs to be solved: in short, everything that makes the story a Mystery.  After that, the rest of the book is dedicated to the standard running around, looking for (or stumbling over) clues, certain characters questioning certain other characters, disclosing the facts needed to solve the mystery in just the right order and at just the right pace. 

CJ:  You can't really say this is a nail biter, but it has a definite pull! I'm finding myself reading ahead in this book that on the surface seems a little bland, but takes you twisting and turning through with people who seem quite unlikely in the setting of a murder. 

FM:  Some people read mostly or even exclusively Mystery novels, and presumably don’t get jaded on this sameness of approach book after book.  There is an element of puzzle-solving for the reader that these readers presumably get hooked on, trying to guess how the ending will play out – figuring out “Who Done It.”  For me, it feels like too-familiar territory and I’m ready for the plot to suddenly veer into an entirely new direction, fearing that it probably won’t.  Hess’ special brand of humor continues to add a lot, but it can’t really carry the story by itself.  Something totally unexpected needs to happen, not just new information coming to light. 

CJ:  The shifting drama between the old Druids, the potentially psychopathic Roy, and the normal daily teen drama with Caron keeps me turning pages.  I can kind of relate to Claire. Plain & boring, but way too much into everyone's business without realizing it. Her attempt to corner Roy from his apartment to Fern's duplex makes you wonder why she didn't just stop looking? Something is driving her to find something she may not really want to find. 

FM:  One device that seems to be a favorite among Mystery writers is to bring in a sub-plot, a secondary story completely unrelated to the plot of the Mystery itself.  This book is no exception; in fact we are treated to two of these sub-plots.  One of them involves Claire’s teenage daughter, Caron, who can be a real parenting challenge. 

CJ:  I have acquired a new favorite saying from this one! "Dealing with teenagers can be like building a castle with dry sand".  I've been searching for those exact words for years! 

FM:  Caron has hired on at the mall to help with the Santa Claus kiosk, where small children line up to sit on Santa’s lap and tell him what they want for Christmas.  This is, in fact, the sole aspect of the book relating directly to Christmas.  She gets involved in a legal wrangle for picking up a lawyer’s child and the worst seems about to happen. 

CJ:  I particularly enjoyed the "Willie Wonka" Violet scene at the mall! How many times have I wanted to correct a poorly parented brat in public! I was cheering for Caron, despite the fact that I knew that a child that spoiled would spell serious trouble. Then the inevitable happened. Another twist in a book with more turns than a hog’s tail!
 
FM:  The other sub-plot involves Claire’s significant other, Peter, and his out-of-town trip to deal with his mother’s boyfriend issues and – uh-oh – his ex-wife drops everything to go and help with that, bringing up real fears and jealousies that Claire is now having to deal with. 

CJ:  A little part of Claire brings to mind Peggy Hill. Like Peggy, she seems to imagine because she somehow ended up in a murder investigation in the past & her boyfriend is a policeman that she now has super sleuth powers. I wonder when Peter is going to confront her involvement in this one?  Speaking of Peter, the ex-wife entering the picture was a nice twist. I could almost feel the hackles go up when that announcement was made! 

FM:  These sub-plots are engagingly dealt with and interesting enough in their own right; but I still get the feeling that they are “filler” designed to help flesh out an otherwise thin plot or to break any possible monotony or jadedness the reader might be experiencing with the standard Mystery plot devices.  Here’s hoping for big surprises to come – but whatever happens, I can recommend this book very highly! 

CJ:  Good call, Foreverman! I was thinking, how about a little Tarl Cabot for old time’s sake? 

FM: We’re certainly on the same page about doing some sci-fi/fantasy for January – I’ve wanted to do that anyway! I would like to defer the Gor novel (Tarl Cabot’s series) until February if everyone’s cool with it, so we can read Kevin J. Anderson’s "Clockwork Angels" in January, as close to Rush's Rock and Roll Hall of Fame induction as possible.  [“Clockwork Angels” is the newest CD by Rush, and the book mirrors the story line depicted in the album lyrics!]


Next week's Chapters: 9-12

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